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804 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2018/08/12(日) 22:52:17.15 ID:3+npIF3Z0.net
自由英作文で以下のテーマを与えられました。
 Are men and women treated equally in the workplace these days?
 Suggested length: 120-150 words. Use Two of the Points below to support your answer.
POINTS: ●Salary ●Job Opportunity ●Child Raising ●Custom
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I think that men and women are not treated equally in the workplace these days.
There are two reasons to think so.
First, men's salary is higher than women's salary in many company in Japan.
It is not equal for employee to rely on their gender for decision their salary.
Second, women have to burden higher costs than men for raising their child.
For instance, when their child birth, give a milk, and so on.
So I think that we ought to raise women's salary and give some rest-time to women for child raising.
Therefore, I think that men and women are not treated equally in the workplace these days.

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