英作の添削してちょ

39 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2017/12/08(金) 12:11:21.84 ID:k1iYLRqPH.net

>>36
The best so far; only really minor things like not starting a sentence with "and" and moving "heading for the living room" to the previous sentence
(the way you have it now sounds like he sat with his legs crossed as a means to head towards the living room).
"...wake up his wife and children and headed for the living room."
"He sat with his legs..."