英検準1級スレ part154

99 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2017/10/23(月) 20:44:02.05 ID:jgIjg9qO0.net

実は日付変わってロンドンニキですが私のにもコメント頂けると嬉しいです。

11点です。以下は問題文にメモしたので正確です。

イントロダクション
Although the Japanese government has made its effort to improve the environment, the Japanese govenment should do more to protect it in terms of pollution and economic costs.

ボディー
First, especially in urban areas,there is traffic jam and it causes air contamination　because harmful stuff from cars.(because of のof　抜けました）
If the Japanese government makes public transportations more,this problem will get better.

Second, initial cost to make and widespread hybrid car is high,but it's beneficial in long term for economic cost(costsですね）.Urging plans to widespread hybridcars with subsity (Urgingの使い方とsubsidiesのスペルミス）
provided by the Japanese government,it's easier to buy the cars for people.

For our health andwith a point of view of cost(costsですね）,
it's essential that the Japanese governmenttake plans (テークプランでいいのか不明）for environment more.