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【日記】英作文をひたすら上げるスレ【課題等】

1 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/23(水) 18:53:19.33 ID:9sS+uNBhd.net
◆主旨
英語で日記、記事やエッセイなど自分の好きなネタをひたすら投稿して、アウトプットの練習をするスレです。
ただし、英検関連や和文英訳以外のものとします。

語学はインプットも大切ですが、アウトプットも同じくらい大切です。こちらで自分の英語力を試したり、他人の英作文を見て、英語学習のモチベーションを維持していきましょう。

◆ルール
・ひたすら投稿ということで長さは1文から複数の長文まで可とします。

・ボランティアで添削してあげることはありとします。また、添削依頼もありとします。

・区別できるように英検の作文や和文英訳は下記のスレでお願いします。

関連スレ
【英検1級・準1級】英作文を添削し合うスレ
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1543510584/
【和文英訳】英作文添削スレ【自由英作】
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1348665060/

2 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/23(水) 19:01:15.91 ID:9sS+uNBhd.net
ないので、建ててみた。



とりあえず一投。

The original sentence from Manyoshu where the naming of new era, "令和", was quoted:
于時初春"令"月 氣淑風"和"梅披鏡前之粉

It says:
Under the spring moon, the wind is calm, and the plum blossoms bloom as if they are the white face powder that a beautiful woman in front of a mirror puts on, and the orchids smell like an incense that stays around her robe.

3 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/09/26(土) 21:24:24.45 ID:Xmvg44Pda.net
i am a pen.

4 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/01(木) 16:01:25.71 ID:wUF6eeYZ0.net
Interesting thread.

Actually I was thinking of creating a similar thread entirely in English. I
once wrote in the reading thread that reading requires practice. Similarly, I
think writing also requires practice.

Thank you OP for creating this thread.

5 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/01(木) 16:12:48.76 ID:wUF6eeYZ0.net
When I was thinking of creating a similar thread I was thinking of a thread
where people can post their monologues, and also sometimes they can chat with
other participants. I thought posting something one is interested in might be
interesting to other people. In this thread it has "diary" in its title and the
concept is similar to the one I was thinking of in this regard.

6 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/02(金) 15:23:21.29 ID:iiVNwT100.net
Thank you, OP. I've always wanted this kind of thread.
I found a similar thread in French on Reddit, but I couldn't find it in English.

7 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/03(土) 09:27:43.24 ID:hQKzxq940.net
I've once searched for this kind of subreddit on Reddit, but couldn't find it.
I thought the system, or the platform, of Reddit is not suitable for this kind
of thread because Reddit is a topic based website and people create a thread
every time they want to say something.

If it's possible to have this kind of thread on Reddit, it might be possible
that we move to Reddit. I personally want to move to Reddit, or any other
English platform, where there are native speakers or non-Japanese English
speakers. I couldn't find any of this kind on the Internet when I searched for
it several years ago. I thought this kind of chat thread was unique to Japanese
people and Western people preferred topic based platforms.

We have only about 250 posts per day here on this board. I hope we have more
people in this thread in the future.

8 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/03(土) 10:49:10.52 ID:hQKzxq940.net
One thing I don't like posting on 5ch is that I can't delete my posts when I
accidentally write something I didn't intend to. On other platforms such as
Reddit or any other chan, you can delete your own posts.

9 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/03(土) 11:08:02.95 ID:hQKzxq940.net
I learned that Zrump tested positive for COVID-19.
He is old. I hope he doesn't die.

10 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/06(火) 22:41:32.41 ID:ZtgLZnOWd.net
哲学:構造主義への誘い

When we categorize animals, we look into thier physical traits to see which one is which kind.
The most famous classification is Animal Kingdom, which first divides animals into two types, one of which is vertebrates.
And then, vertebrates are classified into 5 sub-groups--Amphibians, Fish, Birds, Mammals and Reptiles.
This sophisticated categorization is all credited to the scientific progress that have been made since 18th centuries.
We take this for granted.
In other words, there's a consensus view that everyone understands how we group the animals by their physical aspects.
In ancient China, however, the way people understand the world is totally different.
Take the animal classification for example, ancient Chinese people categorize animals like this:
Noisy Animals
Smelly Animals
Useful Animals
Animals that we can consume as food

Imagine you try to convince people back then that how they understand the world is wrong.
You could easily imagine that nobody takes it seriously.
Likewise, If our descendants from a very distant future somehow managed to arrive our modern world, it is not surprising they would do the same as we would do to those ancient people.

11 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 07:31:49.43 ID:VUqqrAqx0.net
Today many people are learning English in Japan.
I wonder how many of them actually reach a certain level where they want to
start writing in English online. We don't see many of them here on this board.
I wonder where they are.

12 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 07:49:43.14 ID:nUrcpJ1o0.net
>>11
日本語英語って感じがする。

13 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 08:07:24.23 ID:VUqqrAqx0.net
>>12
Can you elaborate?

14 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/09(金) 21:12:50.67 ID:QqQ0G01qd.net
>>10
ネイティブチェック版

When we categorize animals, we look at thier physical traits to see which one goes to which group.
The most famous classification is the Animal Kingdom, which first divides animals into two types, one of which is vertebrates.
And then, vertebrates go on to be classified into 5 sub-groups--Amphibians, Fish, Birds, Mammals and Reptiles.
This sophisticated categorization is all credited to the scientific progress that has been made since 18th century.
We take this for granted.
In other words, there's a consensus view that everyone understands how we group the animals by their physical characteristics.
In ancient China, however, the way people understand the world is totally different.
Take the animal classification for example, ancient Chinese people categorize animals like this:
Noisy Animals
Smelly Animals
Useful Animals
Animals that we can consume as food
So cats with different attitudes go into different categories 😂
Imagine yourself trying to convince people back then that their understanding of the world is wrong.
You could easily imagine that nobody takes you seriously.
Likewise, If our descendants from a very distant future somehow managed to arrive in our modern world, it is not a surprise if they would do the same as we would towards those ancient civilizations.

15 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/10(土) 02:35:31.22 ID:geoKkhGl0.net
I want to know what native speakers will say about my writings. Will they say
what I write is Japanese English as someone mentioned?

16 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/10(土) 06:50:01.81 ID:jzauhG4rd.net
>>11
many people...in Japanは
many Japanese peopleの方が普通では

コンパクトにまとめれば日本人が書いたか分からない。でも、ネイティブの言い回しはシンプルだけど表現の幅が広い。それができない非ネイティブでもシンプルであれば良いとネイティブが言ってた。

17 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/12(月) 02:20:45.59 ID:RdTwAeqd0.net
I made a post here.
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1596250228/500

One day I want to reach native-like fluency and become able to write freely in English as I'm able to now in Japanse.

18 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/10/12(月) 03:26:20.91 ID:RdTwAeqd0.net
I want to follow on Twitter fellow Japanese who decided to post in English, but
it's extremely difficult to find such people as there are no common words they
use. On the other hand, finding Japanese who are self-proclaimed English
professionals is easy. But I have no interest in such people.

19 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/06(金) 07:02:40.92 ID:OYx7LJTka.net
Though new thread could so easily open by everybody, many threads of 5 channel’s
English board are neglected soon.

I think the person who opened this thread has a responsibility by writing everyday in English,
provide some interesting topics, and call many writing responses, and not leave void.
But most of thread bearer tend to be fall to a irresponsible attitude, such as luck of
maintenance, would invite a state of anarchy in English board.
I shocked many threads are left void only but a few writing.
It is a great pity.

Let try to bury this goddamn thread in the past storehouse by flooding 1000 writing
as soon as possible!

20 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 06:37:15.12 ID:KBNmga6+a.net
Everyday, I try to write in English as a means to improve my English writing skill. 
Today’s topic is the “Senkaku” islands.

China is almost controlling over the “Senkaku” islands.
She has claim that the “Senkaku” islands are her own territory, to get out Japanese fishing
boat, threatening use of her coast guard ship’s weapons if needed.
The Japanese government is nothing to do to confront China’s offence.
The Japanese Constitution ban the use of force to solve international dispute,even self-defense.
What is able to do? Nothing!

Now the time come, U.S. paralyze now, please to do as you like, Mr Shi.

21 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 07:25:43.36 ID:AfeclKtba.net
For ordinary Japanese citizen, there is no chance to use English in their daily life,
no opportunity to improve our English skill.

Some say that English is no use for 90% Japanese; mandatory English education is completely
waste of a time, effort and money.
In Japan, English means only as an intellectual accessory, for the selection of university
exam in which most of student’s English ability attain its highest-point.

Let abandon compulsory English education programs in Japan.

22 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 12:29:42.40 ID:n/Mcvc4ya.net
I killed a roach yesterday night in the kitchen.
He or She’s very big, black, swift moving son of a bitch.
I scared and sprayed ‘Mama Killer’ on the roach.
Instantly the roach ascended to heaven
Oh I killed the roach, not mama.
‘Mama Killer’ is another Japanese English!

23 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 12:50:35.08 ID:n/Mcvc4ya.net
Single and plural, tense, position of verb・・,I frequently mistake, but I don’t care about it,
because I am a tyro.
The important thing is to keep writing English every day. I expect finally end up as a good
English writer.
Get in, folks!

24 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 14:43:19.71 ID:V+0mPsI20.net
Crossing a field with milk vetch blooming in profusion,
Waving a parasol, then a black locomotive blows a whistle.
By a tree of a walnut, a lunch time of us two alone.
You are in good mood tasting my hand-made cookies.

Flingging on a yellow cardigan, I'm a butterfly fluttering in wind.
And, you are sure to be a honeybee, penetrating my heart with a knife of love.
Yes. I am wating, closing my eyes.
You're dozing on my knee as a pillow, with your hair soft, like a child.
Something has been changing, like tearing an old book.
I am changing to me I haven't known myself.
And, a yellow cardigan.
I put it softly over your chest while you're sleeping.
I haven't had such tenderness before as getting at a loss wondering how I had become.
Yes.
You are the only prince for me.

25 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 14:50:58.81 ID:V+0mPsI20.net
Something has been changing, like tearing an old book.
I am changing to myself I haven't known before.

Love is always an awful fairly tale, hiding a poisoned apple.
But, the ending is a HAPPY END, necessary with a curtain coming down with a HAPPY END.
Yes.
You are the only prince for me.

26 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 15:52:52.75 ID:QaYtDOz8a.net
Now, I highjack this neglected thread.
I use this thread as my 1000 writing marathon practice ground.
Everybody welcome!

27 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 15:54:20.31 ID:QaYtDOz8a.net
I used to read English book silently, sometimes read aloud about an hour.
I think it is very effective way to improve my English reading skill, though several opinions
deny read aloud method.

28 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 15:57:10.63 ID:QaYtDOz8a.net
One day South Korean student asked Polish student.
“Which was the country most suffered in World WarU.”

“I think Poland was most.”Polish reply as a matter of fact.
Hearing this answer, South Korean student got fury, making his face red, and said.
“No! it’s wrong. Most suffered country was Korea!”

“Don’t you know the world history?” ask Polish student.
“I know the World History. Imperial Japan had invade Korea, and rounded up 200 thousand
Korean women to sex slave. Korean men also were forced to hard labor in the coal mine.”
said South Korean student with full of confidence.

Polish student surprised this outrageous comment, and thought he was crazy or brainwashed
maniac.

29 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:02:45.36 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net
Computers are getting smarter in proportion to the condensation of transistors which grows accordingly with the Moore's law.
You see, it's very hard to predict the future where machines will remove all the language barriers we face everyday in the age of globalization.
NLP which stands for Natural Language Processing is a technique in computer science, with which machines will be able to learn and handle the language at some degree.
However, this technique is still under development and currently machines are only predicting what comes next from the statistical approach. They need both a humongous amount of computation and feeding data to be fine-tuned.
Experts predict that machines will be truly capable of understanding and crafting sentences exactly the way we do.
At this stage, with a help of AI assistance, we will no longer need to learn a foreign language.

30 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:16:27.26 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net
If and only if machines understand our language, they will then be able to learn other realm of knowledge such as physics, mathematics and even social norms.
Then, it can learn more about this world and might even create new things that are beyond our imagination.
Pichai, a CEO of Google, has said that AI is our last invention because it can invent for us thereafter.
Ray kerzweil, who is a notable scientist as well as a futurologist, confidently claims that by 2029, computers will be smarter than any humans on the planet and will outperform them in every tasks we are capable of.

31 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:19:06.42 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net
>>30
they are capable of か、、、

32 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 16:53:59.96 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net
簡単な文も。

What is the advantages of living in a country side?
Come to think of it, they all boil down to two reasons.
One reason is economical. You pay less for everything.
Whereas in the cities, goods are more expensive and popular products are often sold out.
Another reason is associated with stress in
everyday life. You can commute with a car facing less traffic.
On the other hand, you are forced to use very crowded transportations in a city like Tokyo.

33 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 17:00:40.10 ID:LqEZiqsHd.net
>>32
ネイティブはtake very crowded transportationsとするかもな。

コロケーション参考
Cook a dinner. Made a dinner.
Eat a meal. Have a meal.
Wash dishes. Do dishes.

34 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:18:19.27 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
What is the fundamental difference between human and other animals?
There are many contributing factors either which affected directly or indirectly, such as technologies that enabled us to recreate the Earth, or our brains that made it possible to invent tools or systems in which we live in.
But the most notable one is our intellectual attribute with which we magnificently make believe something that has not actually existed in a real sense.
In other words, we have made up the system that came into being by our power of collective imagination, which in turn made it possible for humans to work in tandem in such a large margin other wild animals simply couldn't afford.

35 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:27:24.06 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
To name a few, religious, money and organizations including nations and companies exemplify this.
They are all just a figmentation of our imagination, meaning they don't actually exist in this world.
In stead, we, or a society as a whole believe them as if they are unquestionable rules or creeds that have long been sitting on the chair of human history, so to speak.

36 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:29:14.68 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
>>34
either の位置を directly or indirectly の前に

37 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 21:35:26.17 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
いろいろ見直して再投稿。

What is the fundamental difference between human and other animals?
There are many contributing factors which affected either directly or indirectly, such as technologies that enabled us to recreate the Earth, or our brains that made it possible to invent tools or systems in which we live in.
But the most notable one is our intellectual attribute with which we magnificently make believe something is there that has not actually existed in a real sense.
In other words, we have made up the system that came into being by our power of collective imagination, which in turn made it possible for humans to work in tandem in such a large margin other wild animals simply couldn't afford.
To name a few, religious, money and organizations including nations and companies exemplify this.
They are all just a figmentation of our imagination, meaning they don't actually exist in this world.
In stead, we and a society as a whole believe them as if they are unquestionable rules or creeds that have long been *sitting on the chair of human history, so to speak.

*は比喩的な表現。

38 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 22:35:06.03 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
事実に基づいてない想像。それっぽく書いてみた。

Let's get back to the examples. We will examine one by one, each provided with historical backgrounds.
First, religious is probably the oldest and most controversial concept in the history of human being. It can go back as early as stone age where our ancestors live as hunter-gatherers.
Many evidence suggest that they indeed worshiped some form of supernatural that had back then believed to bring about fortune or luck, particularly of their well-being.
In this context, well-being should be defined as the quality of their lives in terms of health and surrounding environment that provided their food and places to rest for a day.
Markings and drawings on caves in Australia, which experts identified as the scene of their religious ritual, are well-preserved because of the calm in-land climate.

39 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 22:43:57.77 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
>>38
推敲。

>
> Let's get back to the examples. We will examine one by one, each provided with historical backgrounds.
> First, religious is probably the oldest and most controversial concept in the history of human being. It can go back as early as *Stone Age* where our ancestors live as hunter-gatherers.
> Many evidence suggest that they indeed worshiped some form of supernatural that had back then believed to bring about fortune or luck, particularly of their well-being.
> In this context, well-being should be defined as the quality of their lives in terms of health and surrounding environment that provided their food and places to rest for a day.
> Markings and drawings on caves in Australia, which experts identified *them* as the *scenes* of their religious ritual, are well-preserved because of the calm *inland* climate.

40 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 23:17:03.78 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
今日はやる気になったので、ここまで

Next up is a monetary system.
Although the banknotes are made of paper or rigid data, the piece of this material and digital data are by no means worthy of what they can buy.
They are approved by yet another imagination called 'authorities' under which we exchange material goods and services.
Money is vertically a most powerful driving force of our economy, without which we cannot afford the standard of living today, and the good economy supports the purchasing powers which drives the economy further, allowing us to issue bonds to increase our capacity of businesses around town.

41 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/07(土) 23:20:21.64 ID:e7cPGjsOd.net
>>40

> Money is vertically a most powerful driving force of our economy, without which we cannot afford the standard of living today, and the good economy supports the purchasing powers which *drive* the economy further, allowing us to issue bonds to increase our capacity of businesses around town.

42 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/08(日) 20:25:44.96 ID:ZuocS+WUa.net
South Korean activists try to set so-called comfort-women’s bronze statue in the street
of Berlin, German’s capital city.
They claim the so-called comfort women’s statue is the symbol of Japanese army’s cruel
atrocity in the World WarU.
Japanese rounded up 200 thousands Korean women and forced to military sex slaves.

It is lie. It is very funny. Why they cling to such old issue now?
Reason is very clear. Comfort women’s movement is their business; as a mean of make a
living, and make a profiting.
They collect huge donation under the pretext of doing charity of ex-so-called comfort
women; then embezzle donation to their personal use.
South Korean leader of this movement recently was indicted for fraud and embezzlement
by South Korean prosecutor’s office.
It very rousy.

So-called comfort women’s statues now changed to the symbol of ugly shameless money
fraud.

43 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/08(日) 21:05:50.56 ID:ZuocS+WUa.net
>>32
Everything has two aspects; merit and demerit.
I prefer a town life to a country life.

If you live in somewhere in the 23 wards of Tokyo, you can access any subway station
within a few minute. You can go anywhere by train or subway. It’s very convenient.
Although they said Tokyo is a concrete jungle; people are indifferent to others, isolated and
very lonely in a crowd, everybody is stranger, but because of that exactly, Tokyo is a
comfortable place to live.

Person who got tired of living in the city, longing for the countryside life, moved to the sticks,
usually was betrayed by reality.
Local community reject new comer. I hate this nondescript provincialisms.

Town life is best, this is my opinion. Thank you.

44 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/08(日) 21:43:50.17 ID:8Ug9asyxd.net
>>43
That sounds like some stereotypical story from a TV show.
But yes, I partly agree with you.
It seems that, as soon as they noticed that your accent doesn't belong to their local or that you don't speak their dialect, they possibly give you the cold shoulder.

45 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 05:47:19.31 ID:oxrvzv7pd.net
>>33
A native speaker uses *use*in his sentence.

*Many people will not use the public transport as it will be too crowded.*

46 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:52:26.46 ID:nWxBzM4da.net
>>45
I am not the person who wrote the sentence, but your advice is helpful. Thank you.

47 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:55:13.44 ID:nWxBzM4da.net
I use this thread as my 1000 writing marathon practice ground.
I don’t afraid making mistakes, when I write English.

Practice is the only way to improve my English writing, as the proverb says,
"practice makes perfect."

48 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:55:53.74 ID:nWxBzM4da.net
Dualism is a simple way to understand the world.
I am sometimes a Dualist.
I divide the world affairs into two elements.
For example, life and death, good and evil, beauty and ugly, mean and gentle, etc.
Antonym is very important.

49 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 06:57:18.31 ID:nWxBzM4da.net
My computer is watching my life.
The computer analyze all my activity on it; my browsing histories of netsurfing, writing of
homepage, twitter and bulletin board, such a vast data enable to guess my desire, tendency ,
liking correctly.

Such cyberspace watching limited on commercial base in the western world.
But totalitarian state like China, already established total control system over cyberspace.
China boast by naming it “ the sky net system.”
I fear, someday computer takes over human control, like a movie ‘Terminater.’

50 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 20:53:42.63 ID:A/Z8sfBKa.net
China coast guard ships have entered in the Japanese territorial waters around Senkaku
isles successive 280 days. It seems China virtually get control over the isles .

“Are there any countermeasure to protect our territory?” the reporter asked Chief Cabinet
Secretary Suga.
”We are just looking carefully .” Suga responded according to routine.
After that, so-called ‘Regret cannon’ bombardment successively continued .
Now Suga is Prime minister.
Shit !

51 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/09(月) 21:53:32.37 ID:6mOO+n0u0.net
The science fiction film "Terminator" is quite brilliant, particularly Part One and Two.
Those decades-old pieces are still a lot more fantastic than many films released today.
They are literally SF classics.
I lost an interest from Part Three on...and haven't seen the newest one.
How is it ?

I would be negative about such "I-need-your-clothes-your-boots-and-your-motorcycle" thing
turing into reality in the future no matter how sophisticated science technology will be.
Machines are programs. They cannot do anything more than programs direct or order.
If they should attack humans, it means programmers design them to work that way.

52 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 00:49:27.24 ID:GNtg6t0Y0.net
>>51
Haven't you heard the word singularity?
Haven't you watched the film where HAL killing passengers appears?

53 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 00:51:17.46 ID:GNtg6t0Y0.net
>>48
Have you heard about DOUBLE SPEAK?

54 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 11:10:21.84 ID:BP12eghoa.net
>>53

I don’t know what means DOUBLE SPEAK..
You write it all caps, so, I wonder at first it is a book’s title or movie’ name.
I refer wiki. I see it, Doublespeak.
Yes, there is doublespeak flooding.

55 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 11:16:44.54 ID:BP12eghoa.net
Luck of vocabulary, luck of my English writing ability, it is very difficult for me to write
clearly such complex and abstract matters.
But this is a practice, I try.

>>51
We are surrounded many modern civilization’s products.
These products have it’s origin all in a human brain.
To say short, once human brain think something, it is within a reach of realization in this
world, sooner or later, I think.

Human brain’s activity is a reflection of real world, a reflection of material circumstances
and intellectual inheritance knowledge.
Contradiction, collision, anxiety, desire, greed, power, etc, all these elements mingled in
this world. Human brain keenly sensed these elements, and from that he reflect, think,
image, sublimate something. Science and skill helps to realize such human brain’s ideas.

If there are certain possibilities exist in this world, wrong or right, human certainly will sense
it. So, I am afraid Movie the Terminator’s world someday become real world.

Why China name her total cyber control system ‘The Sky Net System,’ same name as
movie ‘Terminator.’ ?

56 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/10(火) 19:49:24.61 ID:PfF7NmFga.net
Lamenting of my lost love which vanished like a dream, I was living alone for years since then.
It was April 4 , I walked under shadow of trees, looking lively green weeds on the tile-roofed
mud wall. It was so beautiful.

57 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 06:53:55.94 ID:VPSrQ4C1a.net
Today’s my topic of 1000 writing marathon is large-scale tax cheats.

China origin Corona-virus is spreading all over Japan. Patients increase daily.
People stop to go out for fear contaminate.
Business like restaurants , tourist industry, retailers, etc, suffered sharp sales decline from
people’s self-control to go out.

Government decided to help the business by supplying the subsidy to them. It is emergency
situation. It needed quick and simple procedure to receive the benefit.
Everybody can receive the subsidy only attach copies of tax reports.

As a result, many youngsters who received the benefit, by counterfeiting tax documents,
appears one after another.
The theory of good human nature wasn't current.

58 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 07:43:07.30 ID:/rBi2O88a.net
There are more than 6,000 young people who received government subsidy, consult their
voluntary disclosure of their tax cheats, want to evade criminal charges.
Too late!It has to be severe punishment for them.

In Japan, when you lost your purse on the road, most are report to the police box within an
hour. It is said that Japanese are such good-will people. This is a myth.

Some person is complaining that the moral of the Japanese decline. I don't think so.
I think 20 percent of Japanese are drop out originally.
They easily commit bad thing. They didn’t remorse their wrongdoing without punishment.

59 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 21:58:25.65 ID:RLZlaiQf01111.net
It is said that the pressure to follow suit with others is strong in Japan.
So, some people feel it cramped to live here.
And, police look like punishing people who don't behave like others.

60 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/11(水) 21:58:55.47 ID:RLZlaiQf01111.net
It is said that the pressure to follow suit with others is strong in Japan.
So, some people feel it cramped to live here.
And, police look like punishing people who don't behave like others.

61 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 07:57:28.47 ID:3dPwQP/za.net
>>51
> ・・such "I-need-your-clothes-your-boots-and-your-motorcycle" thing・・

This expression is very cool and very interesting !
‘Terminator’ has progressed from mere violence action movie to more intellectual future
suggestive apocalyptic movie, I think. So, I recommend you to see‘TerminatorV&W.’

You may surprize that at last cyber-robot become to have consciousness and emotion.
We can’t distinguish cyber-robot and human being.
‘TerminatorV&W’cast us the profound question what is the human being?

62 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 07:58:35.53 ID:3dPwQP/za.net
I want to believe my English is improving. Writing English every day is tough work. But I try.
. Practice makes perfect.

63 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 08:02:15.04 ID:3dPwQP/za.net
Book review: 1Q84 by Murakami Haruki

Murakami is a popular novelist not only Japan but foreign country. His books translated into
many languages. They talked that he was nominated for the Nobel Prize of literature
several times. His books are always best seller.

This time ,I introduce one of his books to you. It is ‘1Q84.’
As a matter of fact, 1Q84 is conscious the title of George Orwell’s ‘1984.’
His other books titles sometimes borrow from other famous work or writer.
It aimed sensationalism. (next follow)

64 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 08:40:24.57 ID:3dPwQP/za.net
>>59

I don’t agree your opinion.
I suppose you mistake China for Japan.

It is said that the pressure to follow government is strong in Chaina.
So, some people feel it cramped to live there.
And, police arrest people who don't obey government order

65 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 09:11:39.89 ID:3dPwQP/za.net
>>57
Police arrest scum.

" ・・ police are proceeding investigation, presuming that the large-scale fraud group which
contains men repeated an unfair unlawful actions. Police arrested an unemployed man ( 23 ),
and the 20 year-old college boy who lives in Oosaka city ,
and Korean nationality bar executive ( 24 ) who lives in Oosaka - Ikuno Ward.
Three applied for the lie that the undergraduate runs the restaurant business of takeout
this year in June according to the police and that they fooled out of 1 million yen of lasting
benefit.” (according to yesterday’s news )

66 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 22:16:12.47 ID:QtFEXCcEa.net
>>56
I suppose you try to translate famous Izumi Shikibu Diary’s beginning sentence.
I correct error of your translation.

It was April 10 , leaves of trees grew and shadows became dense , I looked lively green
weeds on the tile-roofed mud wall. It was so beautiful.

67 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 22:17:06.75 ID:QtFEXCcEa.net
To tell the long story to short・・・・
If I were・・・・
I have a dream・・・
How is this phrase to be accepted?
What does this word mean?

These are my favorite phrases.

68 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 22:51:58.78 ID:Vx3kx8ugd.net
THE DIARY OF IZUMI SHIKIBU

A.D. 1002-1003

MANY months had passed in lamenting the World,1more shadowy than a dream. Already the tenth day of the Deutzia month was over. A deeper shade lay under the trees and the grass on the embankment was greener.2These changes, unnoticed by any, seemed beautiful to her, and while musing upon them a man stepped lightly along behind the hedge. She was idly curious, but when he came towards her she recognized the page of the late prince.3He came at a sorrowful moment, so she said, "Is your coming not long delayed? To talk over the past was inclined." "Would it not have been presuming?Forgive meIn mountain temples have been worshipping. To be without ties is sad, so wishing to take service again I went to Prince Sochi-no-miya."

英訳無理ゲーな件(^-^;
トライは素晴らしい。

69 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/12(木) 23:11:52.64 ID:zVFukbzha.net
Do you know the book which Iris Chang’ wrote, it titled “The Rape of Nanking.”
Iris Chang had suffered a nervous breakdown after publishing this book, and killed herself
by gun in the backseat of her car.
She had mentioned, more than 300thousands mass killing occurred after the Battle of Nanking
capture, in 1937.

How…by rifle, bayonet, hand- grenade, machinegun, gasoline, tank.
When…after the fall of Nanking, six weeks.
How many…300,000.
Whom…Chinese citizens, Chang Kai-Shek’s army soldiers.
Where …Nanking, capital city of China Republic.
What …by imperial Japanese army’s order.
Why …Revenge, enjoy killing.

To tell the long story to short, if you believe this book, you are very naïve person.

70 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/13(金) 20:42:37.50 ID:qHUrQ7Lta.net
Today’s subject is difficult to write for me. But I try 1000 writing marathon!

I visited Shoshazan Engyoji Temple in Okayama prefecture a few years ago.
Engyoji Temple was located in mountain top. I got on the ropeway to go there.
Through the gate, there were lined up billboards one-side of the pass; each billboard depicted
main event of Izumishikibu’s life,with pictures and comments, in chronological order. .
I read carefully these billboards, and interested in Izumishikibu since then.

Izumishikibu was a daughter of governor of Hukui prefecture, one of the excellent poet in
the Heian Period. She had served as imperial household court lady.
She wrote many excellent Japanese style poetry, and praised master of poetry.
She was passionate woman, having been involved with many royal princes.
“She was love machine!” Murasakishikibu blamed on her.

71 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/13(金) 21:37:41.06 ID:aYSPZs0ma.net
NHK radio 2 broadcasting will start new lecture program “ to read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary”
from tomorrow evening to next march. I recommend to listen the new lecture.
To prepare to tomorrows lecture, I have read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary since last week.
And I incline to try translate as a practice.

72 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/13(金) 23:24:26.36 ID:Yd9wT9bQ0.net
英語便で添削してもらえ
金ないならまず稼げ
英語はその後

73 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 00:05:51.55 ID:8kQV+iK70.net
>>70
It is really interesting that in Shoshazan Engyoji in Okayama there were billboards
drawing pictures of a female noble lady, as into the mountain of the temple only male people were allowed to enter. And, it is interesting as well that the name of the mountain is Shoshazan, as the name of the mountain in Himeji, where Benkei was said to have studied, is the same.

74 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 00:11:45.02 ID:8kQV+iK70.net
These days I feel very tired. I feel somewhat difficulty in seeing.
And, I tend to feel depressed sometimes.

75 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 04:49:54.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
HelloTalkもおすすめだ。無料でランダムなネイティブが添削してくれる。友達を作ればちゃんとやってくれる人を選べる。

76 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:15:00.93 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
例えば>>34からの一連の文もみっちり添削された。
これをループするとお金を使わずに文章力を高められる。
真面目に作文を勉強したのは正味一年くらいかな?
今後もがんばる

77 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:18:08.12 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
補足
一年というのは毎日200単語程度の作文を書いた計算だ。添削必須。
3年やればネイティブと同じくらいにはなりそう。
無料という人は実際にやってないか、やらないだけの人だと思う。

78 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:18:45.81 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
無料→無理

79 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:38:04.76 ID:bN/aWwGoa.net
>>72
Thank you for your comment and advice.
But I have enough income to live on.
If you wrote in English, it would be more welcome.

>>75
Did you do?
I don't want to be bother with the unnecessary thing.
Self practice can do at any time, I think it is the best way to improve my English writing.

80 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 05:39:36.51 ID:bN/aWwGoa.net
>>73
Thank you for your comment.
Engyoji Temple is famous as a location for films.
The chief priest is a man of enterprise; he speak very good English ,and guide foreign tourists
by himself.

>>74
What is your problem?
Everyone has their ups and downs.
Try to see the funny side of life.
Please take it easy.

81 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 06:04:40.13 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
The art of fending off stress.

People in the modern world, one way or the other, cooperate with each other to maintain the high standards of living.
Where some produces crops and other provides processed food in a specialized manner that every job is neatly coordinated together in order to make a high productivity.
However, when it comes to work, people are constantly exposed to stressful situations under which they perform their tasks.
Just because you happen to face those awkward moments doesn't necessarily mean that they can stress you out.
Please read the article below 😁

https://www.irishtimes.com/business/work/three-ways-to-fend-off-stress-1.2469728

82 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 06:15:05.08 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
>>81
添削バージョン
Where some *produce crops and *others *provide processed food in a specialized manner *so that every job is neatly coordinated together in order to make a high productivity.

83 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 07:28:45.52 ID:VNXRJGe10.net
素人のネイティブの添削なんてダメ
ライターじゃないと
まず金稼げ
英語が金を稼ぐ役に立ってない

84 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 21:55:06.77 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net
Don’t overrate a native speaker of English who live in Japan.
They are almost dropout of mother-countries.
They can’t show you clear and sharp aesthetic English.
They can correct some words spelling and some basic grammatical mistakes at the most.
But wrong composition is wrong. Crows are never the whiter for washing themselves.

Good teacher is able to rewrite your awkward English composition, keeping essence of your
outlook and intention, and could show you the example of clear and sharp aesthetic English
sentences, like reconstruct the wrong design building.

Most effective way to improve English writing is practice.
Next is reading great numbers of English books.

85 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 21:58:34.63 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
>>84
わが道を行くのはいいな
何かあえてやってる感が特にいいw

86 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 22:11:22.84 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net
>>72
>>75
Don’t give advice unasked.
Please write your experience in English.
Don’t write Japanese in this thread.

87 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 22:55:34.94 ID:8kQV+iK70.net
Not having seen me before around the age of 20,
you might have spent a different life.
I should not have called out to barefoot you and asked your name in the white summer.
Lucky guy and unlucky one
Mens are always either type
Shy girl. I feel sorry for you, you living in a barren hut.
No more than happiness No more than happiness.
Oh, you follow me.

The back of childish you are seen frightened by a knock demanding to pay the rent of our room.
WIth kitchen work, you suffer frostbite.
It would have been better if we could not find a room to live together.
Thorny rose and Chinese milk vetch.
Women are either type.
Shy girl. Look for a cleverer man of a good birth.
No more than happiness No more than happiness.
Oh, you're crying over my shoulder.

Those who have a spot or those obscure.
We are either type.
Shy girl. Though you like good-looking guys,
why did you choose me not popular with girls?
No less than happiness, no less than happiness.
Oh, we are set up to look for happiness together.

88 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 23:00:27.21 ID:8kQV+iK70.net
>>83
Please show your English proficiency through writing
English sentences not Japanese. OK?

89 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/14(土) 23:18:22.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net
>>24
I thought you quoted that poem from somewhere else because I haven't had the slightest idea that this was actually "your original poem". Speechless lol

90 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/15(日) 00:02:17.44 ID:62x5MmhJ0.net
Don't mind about things as what you wrote. Just enjoy it. That will be better than anything else you can.

91 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/15(日) 19:09:01.92 ID:+6jA3aFRa.net
On November 15th, 1835, Sakamoto Ryoma was born.
On November 15th, 1867, his birth day evening, he was assassinated by unknown attackers
at Oumi- hotel in Kyoto.

At first newly selected security police of Kyoto city, popular name ”Sinsen-group” were
supposed to be assailants.
The truth was later revealed. Attackers were less known another security police
“Mimawari-group”.
Today is the anniversary of Sakamoto Ryouma’s death.
Do you like Sakamoto Ryouma?

92 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/15(日) 19:36:59.80 ID:+6jA3aFRa.net
When we write sentences, we need conscious of the person who will read our sentences.
No matter how brief sentences we write, we never stop on the way, and should finish with
clear epilogue.
Compact and clear-cut sentences are best.

93 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/15(日) 20:52:37.36 ID:62x5MmhJ0.net
In the morning at a slope with the a geranium smelling sweet,
you asked me bending the stem of the flower,
whether you can be alive without me.
I replied as I'm OK pouting my lips.
Im bad at telling a lie. I really love you.
You are bad at seeing it through. I can see your tears behind your laugh.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
the whisper "I love you" was the truth.

At the light blue hill with geranium having changed its color,
Hearing you murmuring, "You are not good at kiss," with some hunch, I pressed
you for an answer:
"Do you have another person whom you compare with me?"

You said, "Oh, it has come out!" and showed the tip of your tongue.
You are bad at telling a lie. You have a secret in your mind.
I am a very sensitive person. In your face, I can read that I will become unhappy.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
You are truly honest. I believed it.

Time having passed without any sound, geranium is about to fall.
You say that we cannot meet until finishing his graduation thesis.
Both of us are bad at telling a lie, you saving faces at the time of separation.
Left is only turning back for us behind the border tears draw.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
the word I say to you is Good bye. I cannot tell even a lie other than that word.

94 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/16(月) 07:39:18.20 ID:8glvfcH5a.net
(My 1,000 writing marathon practice)

When Virginia Woolf was bereaved by the death of her beloved mother, she was 13 years old.
When she was 15 years old, she lost elder sister- in- law. When she was 22 years old, she
lost her father. When she was 24 years, she lost her elder brother- in- law.
Then Britain plunged to the First World War. Britain lost great number of people in the war.
She also lost her many friends.

Death is unreasonable. Bereavement is most sad.
Departed person still remain in a memory of our mind. We could remember their smiling.
We could even remember their whispering. We could remember their warmth.
But we have no means to tell them in this real world. It is very sad.
When Virginia Woolf' had start to write her novel, "To the light" house, these sorrow feeling
surely prevailed in her mind.

On the bases of her individual experiences, and she combined it with total lost and nostalgia
feeling which pervaded through British society after the World WarT, Woolf wrote "To the
Light House." I love this book.

95 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/17(火) 22:55:14.06 ID:IA4Rj1lR0.net
Such a noisy sound of the sea fell silent abruptly behind you.
I cannot move an inch while you gazing at me.
Though like at the time of screaming out in a dream I can move my lips,
words I utter is lost in the wind.
I love you, but...
Maybe, surely....

96 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/17(火) 23:34:51.58 ID:IA4Rj1lR0.net
Though walking while diverting my attention,
my mind is left behind.
I am left out from yesterday.
Unseeable finger tips of time turning pages of waves.
Though with little cofidence,
I love you, but
maybe surely.

97 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/18(水) 00:05:48.57 ID:Zqy/L+iZ0.net
Still early sunshine steps back.
On the bottom of the water
transparent broken piece of grass flashes.
So, please take care of it.
I love you but
maybe surely.

Like crying in a dream,
I can move my lips.
But, the word I utter turns to be a wind.
I love you but
maybe surely

Leave from me and don't gaze at me.

98 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/21(土) 23:45:52.30 ID:lhRj7w4U0.net
At the end of the brick path with weeds budding
is your house located.
I rang the doorbell, but
no one appears.

Not realize for myself, but
surely disobedient was I.
I am alone not allowing a little disagreement between us.

It is not until she happens to lose happiness that she notices it.
And, she turns back and seek to find it: a thing left behind by time.

Unwilling to be hurt and cry,
I hurt you.
Sorry for going out
even not saying good bye.

I heard from other the rumor that
you will go to the far a way place.
Though looking by the window into your room,
I cannot see any furniture.

99 :名無しさん@英語勉強中 :2020/11/25(水) 03:05:18.66 ID:lOi71Thud.net
Have you heard of Play Station 5?
It's one of Sony's gaming consoles, which has just came out earlier this month.
You don't see any of them in stock if you are looking at Japanese websites because of popularity and their marketing strategy for Japan.
I mean they intentionally provide much less than the actual demand because it makes people feel more special about the product, further driving the local purchasing power.
This only works in certain markets like Japan where they dominate the market like a monopoly.
They know how to sell things!
But the problem is there are many PS5s on sale at double the original price!
These resellers are Sony's business partners.

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