【日記】英作文をひたすら上げるスレ【課題等】

1 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/09/23(水) 18:53:19.33 ID:9sS+uNBhd.net

◆主旨
英語で日記、記事やエッセイなど自分の好きなネタをひたすら投稿して、アウトプットの練習をするスレです。
ただし、英検関連や和文英訳以外のものとします。

語学はインプットも大切ですが、アウトプットも同じくらい大切です。こちらで自分の英語力を試したり、他人の英作文を見て、英語学習のモチベーションを維持していきましょう。

◆ルール
・ひたすら投稿ということで長さは1文から複数の長文まで可とします。

・ボランティアで添削してあげることはありとします。また、添削依頼もありとします。

・区別できるように英検の作文や和文英訳は下記のスレでお願いします。

関連スレ
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https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1543510584/
【和文英訳】英作文添削スレ【自由英作】
https://lavender.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/english/1348665060/

58 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/11(水) 07:43:07.30 ID:/rBi2O88a.net

There are more than 6,000 young people who received government subsidy, consult their
voluntary disclosure of their tax cheats, want to evade criminal charges.
Too late！It has to be severe punishment for them.

In Japan, when you lost your purse on the road, most are report to the police box within an
hour. It is said that Japanese are such good-will people. This is a myth.

Some person is complaining that the moral of the Japanese decline. I don't think so.
I think 20 percent of Japanese are drop out originally.
They easily commit bad thing. They didn’t remorse their wrongdoing without punishment.

59 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/11(水) 21:58:25.65 ID:RLZlaiQf01111.net

It is said that the pressure to follow suit with others is strong in Japan.
So, some people feel it cramped to live here.
And, police look like punishing people who don't behave like others.

60 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/11(水) 21:58:55.47 ID:RLZlaiQf01111.net

It is said that the pressure to follow suit with others is strong in Japan.
So, some people feel it cramped to live here.
And, police look like punishing people who don't behave like others.

61 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 07:57:28.47 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

>>51
> ・・such "I-need-your-clothes-your-boots-and-your-motorcycle" thing・・

This expression is very cool and very interesting !
‘Terminator’ has progressed from mere violence action movie to more intellectual future
suggestive apocalyptic movie, I think. So, I recommend you to see‘Terminator�V&�W.’

You may surprize that at last ｃyber-robot become to have consciousness and emotion.
We can’t distinguish cyber-robot and human being.
‘Terminator�V&�W’cast us the profound question what is the human being?

62 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 07:58:35.53 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

I want to believe my English is improving. Writing English every day is tough work. But I try.
. Practice makes perfect.

63 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 08:02:15.04 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

Book review: 1Q84 by Murakami Haruki

Murakami is a popular novelist not only Japan but foreign country. His books translated into
many languages. They talked that he was nominated for the Nobel Prize of literature
several times. His books are always best seller.

This time ,I introduce one of his books to you. It is ‘1Q84.’
As a matter of fact, 1Q84 is conscious the title of George Orwell’s ‘1984.’
His other books titles sometimes borrow from other famous work or writer.
It aimed sensationalism. (next follow)

64 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 08:40:24.57 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

>>59

I don’t agree your opinion.
I suppose you mistake China for Japan.

It is said that the pressure to follow government is strong in Chaina.
So, some people feel it cramped to live there.
And, police arrest people who don't obey government order

65 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 09:11:39.89 ID:3dPwQP/za.net

>>57
Police arrest scum.

" ･･ police are proceeding investigation, presuming that the large-scale fraud group which
contains men repeated an unfair unlawful actions. Police arrested an unemployed man ( 23 ),
and the 20 year-old college boy who lives in Oosaka city ,
and Korean nationality bar executive ( 24 ) who lives in Oosaka - Ikuno Ward.
Three applied for the lie that the undergraduate runs the restaurant business of takeout
this year in June according to the police and that they fooled out of 1 million yen of lasting
benefit.” (according to yesterday’s news )

66 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 22:16:12.47 ID:QtFEXCcEa.net

>>56
I suppose you try to translate famous Izumi Shikibu Diary’s beginning sentence.
I correct error of your translation.

It was April 10 , leaves of trees grew and shadows became dense , I looked lively green
weeds on the tile-roofed mud wall. It was so beautiful.

67 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 22:17:06.75 ID:QtFEXCcEa.net

To tell the long story to short・・・・
If I were・・・・
I have a dream・・・
How is this phrase to be accepted?
What does this word mean?

These are my favorite phrases.

68 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 22:51:58.78 ID:Vx3kx8ugd.net

THE DIARY OF IZUMI SHIKIBU

A.D. 1002-1003

MANY months had passed in lamenting the World,1�more shadowy than a dream. Already the tenth day of the Deutzia month was over. A deeper shade lay under the trees and the grass on the embankment was greener.2�These changes, unnoticed by any, seemed beautiful to her, and while musing upon them a man stepped lightly along behind the hedge. She was idly curious, but when he came towards her she recognized the page of the late prince.3�He came at a sorrowful moment, so she said, "Is your coming not long delayed? To talk over the past was inclined." "Would it not have been presuming?�Forgive me�In mountain temples have been worshipping. To be without ties is sad, so wishing to take service again I went to Prince Sochi-no-miya."

英訳無理ゲーな件(^-^;
トライは素晴らしい。

69 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/12(木) 23:11:52.64 ID:zVFukbzha.net

Do you know the book which Iris Chang’ wrote, it titled “The Rape of Nanking.”
Iris Chang had suffered a nervous breakdown after publishing this book, and killed herself
by gun in the backseat of her car.
She had mentioned, more than 300thousands mass killing occurred after the Battle of Nanking
capture, in 1937.

How…by rifle, bayonet, hand- grenade, machinegun, gasoline, tank.
When…after the fall of Nanking, six weeks.
How many…300,000.
Whom…Chinese citizens, Chang Kai-Shek’s army soldiers.
Where …Nanking, capital city of China Republic.
What …by imperial Japanese army’s order.
Why …Revenge, enjoy killing.

To tell the long story to short, if you believe this book, you are very naïve person.

70 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/13(金) 20:42:37.50 ID:qHUrQ7Lta.net

Today’s subject is difficult to write for me. But I try 1000 writing marathon!

I visited Shoshazan Engyoji Temple in Okayama prefecture a few years ago.
Engyoji Temple was located in mountain top. I got on the ropeway to go there.
Through the gate, there were lined up billboards one-side of the pass; each billboard depicted
main event of Izumishikibu’s life,with pictures and comments, in chronological order. .
I read carefully these billboards, and interested in Izumishikibu since then.

Izumishikibu was a daughter of governor of Hukui prefecture, one of the excellent poet in
the Heian Period. She had served as imperial household court lady.
She wrote many excellent Japanese style poetry, and praised master of poetry.
She was passionate woman, having been involved with many royal princes.
“She was love machine!” Murasakishikibu blamed on her.

71 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/13(金) 21:37:41.06 ID:aYSPZs0ma.net

NHK radio 2 broadcasting will start new lecture program “ to read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary”
from tomorrow evening to next march. I recommend to listen the new lecture.
To prepare to tomorrows lecture, I have read Izumi- Shikibu’s diary since last week.
And I incline to try translate as a practice.

72 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/13(金) 23:24:26.36 ID:Yd9wT9bQ0.net

英語便で添削してもらえ
金ないならまず稼げ
英語はその後

73 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 00:05:51.55 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

>>70
It is really interesting that in Shoshazan Engyoji in Okayama there were billboards
drawing pictures of a female noble lady, as into the mountain of the temple only male people were allowed to enter. And, it is interesting as well that the name of the mountain is Shoshazan, as the name of the mountain in Himeji, where Benkei was said to have studied, is the same.

74 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 00:11:45.02 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

These days I feel very tired. I feel somewhat difficulty in seeing.
And, I tend to feel depressed sometimes.

75 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 04:49:54.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

HelloTalkもおすすめだ。無料でランダムなネイティブが添削してくれる。友達を作ればちゃんとやってくれる人を選べる。

76 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 05:15:00.93 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

例えば>>34からの一連の文もみっちり添削された。
これをループするとお金を使わずに文章力を高められる。
真面目に作文を勉強したのは正味一年くらいかな？
今後もがんばる

77 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 05:18:08.12 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

補足
一年というのは毎日200単語程度の作文を書いた計算だ。添削必須。
3年やればネイティブと同じくらいにはなりそう。
無料という人は実際にやってないか、やらないだけの人だと思う。

78 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 05:18:45.81 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

無料→無理

79 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 05:38:04.76 ID:bN/aWwGoa.net

>>72
Thank you for your comment and advice.
But I have enough income to live on.
If you wrote in English, it would be more welcome.

>>75
Did you do?
I don't want to be bother with the unnecessary thing.
Self practice can do at any time, I think it is the best way to improve my English writing.

80 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 05:39:36.51 ID:bN/aWwGoa.net

>>73
Thank you for your comment.
Engyoji Temple is famous as a location for films.
The chief priest is a man of enterprise; he speak very good English ,and guide foreign tourists
by himself.

>>74
What is your problem?
Everyone has their ups and downs.
Try to see the funny side of life.
Please take it easy.

81 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 06:04:40.13 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

The art of fending off stress.

People in the modern world, one way or the other, cooperate with each other to maintain the high standards of living.
Where some produces crops and other provides processed food in a specialized manner that every job is neatly coordinated together in order to make a high productivity.
However, when it comes to work, people are constantly exposed to stressful situations under which they perform their tasks.
Just because you happen to face those awkward moments doesn't necessarily mean that they can stress you out.
Please read the article below 😁

https://www.irishtimes.com/business/work/three-ways-to-fend-off-stress-1.2469728

82 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 06:15:05.08 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

>>81
添削バージョン
Where some *produce crops and *others *provide processed food in a specialized manner *so that every job is neatly coordinated together in order to make a high productivity.

83 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 07:28:45.52 ID:VNXRJGe10.net

素人のネイティブの添削なんてダメ
ライターじゃないと
まず金稼げ
英語が金を稼ぐ役に立ってない

84 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 21:55:06.77 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net

Don’t overrate a native speaker of English who live in Japan.
They are almost dropout of mother-countries.
They can’t show you clear and sharp aesthetic English.
They can correct some words spelling and some basic grammatical mistakes at the most.
But wrong composition is wrong. Crows are never the whiter for washing themselves.

Good teacher is able to rewrite your awkward English composition, keeping essence of your
outlook and intention, and could show you the example of clear and sharp aesthetic English
sentences, like reconstruct the wrong design building.

Most effective way to improve English writing is practice.
Next is reading great numbers of English books.

85 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 21:58:34.63 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

>>84
わが道を行くのはいいな
何かあえてやってる感が特にいいw

86 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 22:11:22.84 ID:G/AqfzHJa.net

>>72
>>75
Don’t give advice unasked.
Please write your experience in English.
Don’t write Japanese in this thread.

87 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 22:55:34.94 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

Not having seen me before around the age of 20,
you might have spent a different life.
I should not have called out to barefoot you and asked your name in the white summer.
Lucky guy and unlucky one
Mens are always either type
Shy girl. I feel sorry for you, you living in a barren hut.
No more than happiness No more than happiness.
Oh, you follow me.

The back of childish you are seen frightened by a knock demanding to pay the rent of our room.
WIth kitchen work, you suffer frostbite.
It would have been better if we could not find a room to live together.
Thorny rose and Chinese milk vetch.
Women are either type.
Shy girl. Look for a cleverer man of a good birth.
No more than happiness No more than happiness.
Oh, you're crying over my shoulder.

Those who have a spot or those obscure.
We are either type.
Shy girl. Though you like good-looking guys,
why did you choose me not popular with girls?
No less than happiness, no less than happiness.
Oh, we are set up to look for happiness together.

88 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 23:00:27.21 ID:8kQV+iK70.net

>>83
Please show your English proficiency through writing
English sentences not Japanese. OK?

89 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/14(土) 23:18:22.76 ID:mQCHtMcgd.net

>>24
I thought you quoted that poem from somewhere else because I haven't had the slightest idea that this was actually "your original poem". Speechless lol

90 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/15(日) 00:02:17.44 ID:62x5MmhJ0.net

Don't mind about things as what you wrote. Just enjoy it. That will be better than anything else you can.

91 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/15(日) 19:09:01.92 ID:+6jA3aFRa.net

On November 15th, 1835, Sakamoto Ryoma was born.
On November 15th, 1867, his birth day evening, he was assassinated by unknown attackers
at Oumi- hotel in Kyoto.

At first newly selected security police of Kyoto city, popular name ”Sinsen-group” were
supposed to be assailants.
The truth was later revealed. Attackers were less known another security police
“Mimawari-group”.
Today is the anniversary of Sakamoto Ryouma’s death.
Do you like Sakamoto Ryouma?

92 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/15(日) 19:36:59.80 ID:+6jA3aFRa.net

When we write sentences, we need conscious of the person who will read our sentences.
No matter how brief sentences we write, we never stop on the way, and should finish with
clear epilogue.
Compact and clear-cut sentences are best.

93 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/15(日) 20:52:37.36 ID:62x5MmhJ0.net

In the morning at a slope with the a geranium smelling sweet,
you asked me bending the stem of the flower,
whether you can be alive without me.
I replied as I'm OK pouting my lips.
Im bad at telling a lie. I really love you.
You are bad at seeing it through. I can see your tears behind your laugh.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
the whisper "I love you" was the truth.

At the light blue hill with geranium having changed its color,
Hearing you murmuring, "You are not good at kiss," with some hunch, I pressed
you for an answer:
"Do you have another person whom you compare with me?"

You said, "Oh, it has come out!" and showed the tip of your tongue.
You are bad at telling a lie. You have a secret in your mind.
I am a very sensitive person. In your face, I can read that I will become unhappy.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
You are truly honest. I believed it.

Time having passed without any sound, geranium is about to fall.
You say that we cannot meet until finishing his graduation thesis.
Both of us are bad at telling a lie, you saving faces at the time of separation.
Left is only turning back for us behind the border tears draw.
Oh, while there are as much as 100 lies between couples,
the word I say to you is Good bye. I cannot tell even a lie other than that word.

94 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/16(月) 07:39:18.20 ID:8glvfcH5a.net

(My 1,000 writing marathon practice)

When Virginia Woolf was bereaved by the death of her beloved mother, she was 13 years old.
When she was 15 years old, she lost elder sister- in- law. When she was 22 years old, she
lost her father. When she was 24 years, she lost her elder brother- in- law.
Then Britain plunged to the First World War. Britain lost great number of people in the war.
She also lost her many friends.

Death is unreasonable. Bereavement is most sad.
Departed person still remain in a memory of our mind. We could remember their smiling.
We could even remember their whispering. We could remember their warmth.
But we have no means to tell them in this real world. It is very sad.
When Virginia Woolf' had start to write her novel, "To the light" house, these sorrow feeling
surely prevailed in her mind.

On the bases of her individual experiences, and she combined it with total lost and nostalgia
feeling which pervaded through British society after the World War�T, Woolf wrote "To the
Light House." I love this book.

95 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/17(火) 22:55:14.06 ID:IA4Rj1lR0.net

Such a noisy sound of the sea fell silent abruptly behind you.
I cannot move an inch while you gazing at me.
Though like at the time of screaming out in a dream I can move my lips,
words I utter is lost in the wind.
I love you, but...
Maybe, surely....

96 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/17(火) 23:34:51.58 ID:IA4Rj1lR0.net

Though walking while diverting my attention,
my mind is left behind.
I am left out from yesterday.
Unseeable finger tips of time turning pages of waves.
Though with little cofidence,
I love you, but
maybe surely.

97 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/18(水) 00:05:48.57 ID:Zqy/L+iZ0.net

Still early sunshine steps back.
On the bottom of the water
transparent broken piece of grass flashes.
So, please take care of it.
I love you but
maybe surely.

Like crying in a dream,
I can move my lips.
But, the word I utter turns to be a wind.
I love you but
maybe surely

Leave from me and don't gaze at me.

98 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/21(土) 23:45:52.30 ID:lhRj7w4U0.net

At the end of the brick path with weeds budding
is your house located.
I rang the doorbell, but
no one appears.

Not realize for myself, but
surely disobedient was I.
I am alone not allowing a little disagreement between us.

It is not until she happens to lose happiness that she notices it.
And, she turns back and seek to find it: a thing left behind by time.

Unwilling to be hurt and cry,
I hurt you.
Sorry for going out
even not saying good bye.

I heard from other the rumor that
you will go to the far a way place.
Though looking by the window into your room,
I cannot see any furniture.

99 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/11/25(水) 03:05:18.66 ID:lOi71Thud.net

Have you heard of Play Station 5?
It's one of Sony's gaming consoles, which has just came out earlier this month.
You don't see any of them in stock if you are looking at Japanese websites because of popularity and their marketing strategy for Japan.
I mean they intentionally provide much less than the actual demand because it makes people feel more special about the product, further driving the local purchasing power.
This only works in certain markets like Japan where they dominate the market like a monopoly.
They know how to sell things!
But the problem is there are many PS5s on sale at double the original price!
These resellers are Sony's business partners.

100 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/13(日) 14:57:45.83 ID:m6KB7HWod.net

Despite the fact that a term, technological singularity is much thrown around these days, I found out surprisingly that many people actually refer it without knowing of what it precisely means.

Technological singularity is a point in time at which technological growth becomes uncontrollable and irreversible, transforming human civilization as a whole in unprecedented and unimaginable way that we can't predict even a bit.

So why is this happening?
First of all, history tells us that the rate at which new inventions are made is accelerating at an exponential rate.
See the paragraph below. You can see what I mean by the acceleration.
This is mainly because new technology usually born from conventional technologies that are combined to apply in a totally different way.

Years ago/The year gap in-between/Invention
1,800,000 800,000 Simple handcrafted tools
1,000,000 700,000 Spoken language
25,000 15,000 Drawing, Premitive City
10,000 5,000 Agriculture
5,000 2,490 Writing, Wheel
2,510 1,960 City-state
550 325 Printing, Scientific method
225 95 Industrial revolution
130 65 Telephone, Electricity, Radio
65 38 Computer
27 14 Personal Computer

Future
Last invention Human-like Artificial Intelligence

101 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/13(日) 15:21:39.91 ID:m6KB7HWod.net

Technology can bring a change about our society as it did in the past and it will.
Take Internet for example, it has change our lifestyle.
We arrange our daily schedule to squeeze out as much free time just to spend more time on it.
It made everyone accessible to all the information they needed and even provides opportunities with them to the free education.
As for yet-to-be-seen future technologies, it is undeniable that they will follow this trend.

102 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/13(日) 15:32:24.34 ID:m6KB7HWod.net

途中だけど、

The U.S. has been the most important partner for Japan economically, politically and culturally since the end of WWll.
But it is on the cusp of losing its grip on world supremacy, seeing the rise of China.
As a matter of fact, China is attempting shaking up the current system the U.S. established to ensure its global dominance such as a partnership with its neighbors, international currency system driven by U.S. dollar and presence of overwhelming military power.
There are three reasons to support the idea.

Firstly, the most important foundation work to be a superpower is to establish partnership with neighboring countries.
This association among allies forms a front line of defense.
This then endows the country with a great defense capability against any harmful attempts from the opposing force including invasion, securing the opportunities for its economy and culture to be full-fledged.

103 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/28(月) 00:59:22.77 ID:J0zwfBIM0.net

>>102
economist からなん?

104 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/28(月) 04:28:41.99 ID:J0zwfBIM0.net

In my work place, some people are witched abnormally.
On earth, a person who has been a president since this April is a person
who has done hurtful things to me.
He has an abnormal history of getting married with his seminar student after
seeing each other in his seminar.
And, just before I started to work as his colleague, an old person had been forced to quit the
workplace as he had met his retiring age. But, the old man insisted that he should continue to
be hirered as he had been promised it by the former president.
The next president who had been in that position one year before I started to work had ignored that
promise by the former president of his, and had forced the old person’s to quit the job.
Actually, that president was a seminar teacher in an graduate course, of the abnormally wicked
person with whom I started this story. And, the abnormal person recommended his teacher as a
would be president in the workplace and that person won that position as a new president then.

And that president had attended the wedding of the abnormal person.
And I heard from that president that the reason he had forced the old person to quit was to
avoid a young person to be pressured by the old person.He rejected saying the name of the
young person he mentioned, but it is not a mistake to think that the person is his seminar student
of him, the person who had gotten married with his seminar student.

I continue this story later.

105 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2020/12/28(月) 04:39:21.40 ID:J0zwfBIM0.net

people who appeared till now.
1 abnormally witched person, who married with his seminar student, and became a new president
eight months ago.
2 an president who had been a president, who had been a seminar teacher
of the abnormally witched person.
3 an old person with promise to be hired continually after his retiring age from the former president,
but actually was forced to quit in his retiring age by the president of 2.

106 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2021/01/31(日) 18:20:29.41 ID:WubHIiFt0.net

　　

【佐賀】県下一斉模擬試験の問題文に「彼らは稼げないからモスクへ行きテロリストになる」
https://hayabusa9.5ch.net/test/read.cgi/news/1612060433/

74 ハバナブラウン(茸) [DE] ▼ 2021/01/31(日) 18:06:06.08 ID:qKcHCqgI0 [1回目]
長文読解は「全国高校生徒英作文コンテスト」（主催：全国英語教育研究団体連合会）で
当時の高校１年生が書いた最優秀作品を引用した。

77 キジ白(茸) [TW] ▼ New! 2021/01/31(日) 18:08:05.54 ID:RnLFqMUN0 [1回目]
英作文は最終的には「世界から貧困と戦争を終わらせたい」と締めくくっている。

81 スミロドン(茸) [ZA] ▼ New! 2021/01/31(日) 18:13:54.25 ID:6tOXFozN0 [1回目]
>77
英作文全体をよく読むと最優秀作品の名に値する素晴らしい内容です。
言葉尻による表面的な批判が多いのに失望です。
　　

107 ：名無しさん＠英語勉強中 ：2021/05/16(日) 20:09:14.15 ID:WAhKF9nzd.net

If you are unemployed, you can seek advice from someone who's been through the same struggles.
You are doing your absolute best to make as much money as possible and secure a living.

If you are facing unavoidable death by cancer, there is nobody in the world who could give you down-to-earth advice.
Your dreams of future suddenly shut down and your attention turn to the inside, away from the materialistic world.

I'm not talking of religion but you will need to embrace the reality of death that up until now has been so farfetched to imagine.

FYI, a lot of cancer patients regret the very same thing. They wish they had known more about religious things.

This is not their fault, just a part of human nature. We're only conscious of the present and our own immediate future imaginable.