【和文英訳】英作文添削スレ【自由英作】

名無しさん＠英語勉強中

大学受験の入試で自由英作文を使うのですが添削お願いします

What do you think the advantages or disadvantages of the five-day school in Japanese elementary school?

I think the advantage of the five-day school in Japanese elementary school is students can use holidays to do their club activities such as sports, music, drowning and so on.
By taking part in such activities, they can do what they are interested in and it can be help making their personal character; they can learn how to cooperate with and respect others.
But the disadvantage is ,I think, for a student who has nothing interested in, holidays can be spent wastefully.
School plays as important role for students to find what they want to do as education.